22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3
From my last elevator pitch I added more information to support my reasoning for using the automatic sunscreen application machine. I added in references to all of the interviews I have conducted throughout the course to show why the machine is beneficial and a luxury. I also added more to my pitch by removing my vocal pauses and speaking continuously throughout the entire video.
The difference between my first and my last elevator pitch is tremendous. While the information itself didn’t change drastically, the way the information is expressed and presented did. The first pitch a lot of pauses and not a lot of dull information. The last pitch has more useful and supported information. Also, by the third pitch I felt a lot more confident in the information I was presenting which made recording the pitch a lot easier. I was able to do it in two or three tries versus the first pitch which took me five or six tries.
Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI think you really improved in your elevator pitch! You already flowed really well with your speech in your past pitches, and you continue to do so! The content of your pitch was also more focused this time with more useful information as you said. Great job with your eye contact, consistent speech, and hand gestures.