17A- Elevator Pitch No. 2
From my last elevator pitch I learned that slow, fluent speech is important. I should continue to take my time while explaining my product and focus on the quality of the information versus the amount. It is also important to highlight the benefits of the machine and the luxuries of using it. I found that my feedback on the quality of my information was most beneficial. Learning that those who watched my pitch easily understood the concept and idea of the automatic sunscreen application machine was great. I now know I can focus on rephrasing to flow smoother and fit in more information without having to worry about getting my point a crossed because it is understood.
Based on the feedback I changed my wording to be more consistent and highlight more of the features of the automatic sunscreen application machine. I will continue to keep my speech at the same energy level and use the same simple, easy to understand wording.
Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you maintained eye contact throughout your whole pitch and how your speech was level and controlled. Your product was extremely easy to understand and you had my attention the whole time. I think the strongest aspect of your pitch was how calm you were and how clear you were when explaining your product. Nice job!
Hey Oliva,
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing elevator pitch. I really liked how you kept your composure and showed that you really improved. Looking back from your previous elevator pitch I can see a lot of improvements from the last one. You kept eye contact, you had lots of confidence, and you had a strong upright posture. Overall this was a great post