Olivia, I really enjoyed your elevator pitch and I especially liked how you didn't rush your speech, but took your time to make it flow smoothly. Your pitch was easy to understand, explained how your sunscreen machine worked, and highlighted the benefits of it. You ended on a great note with how people won't be struggling anymore lugging around their sunscreen or having to deal with sticky fingers. Nice job!
Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch and I especially liked how you didn't rush your speech, but took your time to make it flow smoothly. Your pitch was easy to understand, explained how your sunscreen machine worked, and highlighted the benefits of it. You ended on a great note with how people won't be struggling anymore lugging around their sunscreen or having to deal with sticky fingers. Nice job!